PIRATE ( performed by shut-eye nice
You need a better drummer. He's off-rhythm a lot. Especially when he hits the crash. Also, your second guitarist is bad at staying in time. But A for effort. Nice composition.
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Luffy responds:
yeah...
still in the ruff stages its a single guitar and bass but your right about timing as i said we just wanted ruff tracks to go forward in recording
yar
Well, it's not too bad. It's just that it doesn't really follow much of today's musical rules.
Never have a general pitch change unless it's on an even note. Or only odd ones if there's on on every single note for an even amount of notes.
Keep it changing every 8 or 16 or 32 beats.
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